Peer Review

Reviewer Name: Sonia Aguiar

Name of Author under Review Alison Tremblay

Title of Work Reviewed Major Assignment #3, Draft #1

Date 26/11/2020

1. In your own words, fully and with precision, describe what the assignment is asking the writer (your partner) to do?  

The assignment is asking my classmate to write 3 different genre compositions. Those will have to communicate to her intended audience using reference of the research and analysis done of the previous essay, along with new sources, to show her strategy and rhetorical choices therefore, creating an effective project.

2. To what extent has your partner met the expectations of the assignment? 

My classmate very well met the expectations of this assignment about her research question. She delivers great arguments in each composition that tied up her previous work to this one. She used strong visuals and messaging that captivated the different age groups as was her intent.

I particularly enjoyed her short video whereby introducing Jane as ''someone like me'' was indeed a creative strategy. She makes the rhetorical choices accordingly to create an effective composition. Her strategy awakened my curiosity on what would come next. Her video was short, as expected to be and the music choice was appropriately introduced for her topic - fitting the imaging and messaging. Overall, it was in my humble opinion on point.

‘’ I am a visual learner so I felt that making different visuals would help get my purpose across to my readers. I also feel that visuals are an easy way for people to absorb information.’’

‘’ I didn’t want to make it not fit a certain age group. Slowly but surely figure out my information and went back over it to make sure it fit my audience well.’’

3. What area needs more work?  Why?  Please quote and comment on a passage as illustration, and describe what isn’t working, referring to the assignment checklist.

Personally, I cannot see any section of this essay that would need more work! I feel that Alison did a phenomenal job at explaining each piece of the three different genres she was asked to compose.

4. Please indicate TWO questions about the draft and at least ONE suggestion for ways to improve it.

Does the human body need to absorb blue lights at all?

Do you think this issue of blue light exposure is addressed enough?

I have no added suggestions for Alison as she has executed, a very good paper on her topic.