Reviewer Name: Sonia Aguiar

Name of Author under Review: Alissa Kresowaty

Title of Work Reviewed: Major Assignment # 2, Draft #1

Date: 28/10/2020

Q: In your own words, fully and with precision, describe what the assignment is asking the writer (your partner) to do?  Please use your own words rather than merely quote from the assignment. And please use the checklist as reference.

A: This assignment is asking my partner to write a research paper on a topic of her choice, lengthwise of at least 1000 words, with the objective of developing an inquiry-based research essay.

 

Q:To what extent has your partner met the expectations of the assignment?  Please pick a passage as illustration and describe what works well there, referring to the assignment checklist.

A: I feel that Alissa did a phenomenal job developing the required inquiry-based research essay on the topic of human trafficking.  A passage that grabbed my attention was, “Human Trafficking is modern day slavery. There is no other way to say it.” Alissa speaks of a subject that deserves more exposure, and she backs it up with the required number of sources that were asked from her.

 

Q:What area needs more work?  Why?  Please pick a passage as illustration, and describe what is not working, referring to the assignment checklist.

 A: I see nothing wrong with any section. Although, I do feel that the interview would have add more value to this paper.

 

Q: Please indicate TWO questions about the draft and at least ONE suggestion for ways to improve it.

1. During this research, did you find any new information that was surprising? What was it ?

2. In the United States how is pimping a form of sex trafficking?

I feel the paper was a good read, it lacked the Tittle. The conclusion aspect was a little bit summarized, other than that, it was a great effort from Alissa. Good job.